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This
article contains three parts:
Step
One: Brainstorming
Scholarship essays vary dramatically in
subject. However, most of them require a recounting of
personal experience. These tips will be more helpful for
writing personal essays, like for the National Merit Scholarship,
than for writing academic essays.
The most important aspect of your scholarship
essay is the subject matter. You should expect to devote
about 1-2 weeks simply to brainstorming ideas. To begin
brainstorming a subject idea consider the following points.
From brainstorming, you may find a subject you had not
considered at first.
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What
are your major accomplishments, and why do you consider
them accomplishments? Do not limit yourself to accomplishments
you have been formally recognized for since the
most interesting essays often are based on accomplishments
that may have been trite at the time but become
crucial when placed in the context of your life.
This is especially true if the scholarship committee
receives a list of your credentials anyway.
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Does
any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish you
from everyone else? How did you develop this attribute?
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Consider
your favorite books, movies, works of art, etc.
Have these influenced your life in a meaningful
way? Why are they your favorites?
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What
was the most difficult time in your life, and why?
How did your perspective on life change as a result
of the difficulty?
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Have
you ever struggled mightily for something and succeeded?
What made you successful?
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Have
you ever struggled mightily for something and failed?
How did you respond?
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Of
everything in the world, what would you most like
to be doing right now? Where would you most like
to be? Who, of everyone living and dead, would you
most like to be with? These questions should help
you realize what you love most.
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Have
you experienced a moment of epiphany, as if your
eyes were opened to something you were previously
blind to?
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What
is your strongest, most unwavering personality trait?
Do you maintain strong beliefs or adhere to a philosophy?
How would your friends characterize you? What would
they write about if they were writing your scholarship
essay for you?
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What
have you done outside of the classroom that demonstrates
qualities sought after by universities? Of these,
which means the most to you?
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What
are your most important extracurricular or community
activities? What made you join these activities?
What made you continue to contribute to them?
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What
are your dreams of the future? When you look back
on your life in thirty years, what would it take
for you to consider your life successful? What people,
things, and accomplishments do you need? How does
this particular scholarship fit into your plans
for the future?
If these questions cannot cure your writer's
block, consider the following exercises:
1. Ask for Help from Parents, Friends,
Colleagues, etc.
If you cannot characterize yourself and your personality
traits do not automatically leap to mind, ask your friends
to write a list of your five most salient personality
traits. Ask your friends why they chose the ones they
did. If an image of your personality begins to emerge,
consider life experiences that could illustrate these
particular traits.
2. Consider your Childhood
While scholarship and aid officers are not interested
in reading about your childhood and are more interested
in the last 2-4 years of your life, you might consider
events of your childhood that inspired the interests
you have today. Interests that began in childhood may
be the most defining parts of your life, even if you
recently lost interest. For instance, if you experienced
extreme poverty, the death of a loved one, immigration,
etc., you might want to incorporate this into your scholarship
essay. Analyze the reasons for your interests and how
they were shaped from your upbringing.
3. Consider your Role Models
Many applicants do not have role models and were never
greatly influenced by just one or two people. However,
for those of you who have role models and actually aspire
to become like certain people, you may want to incorporate
a discussion of that person and the traits you admired
into your scholarship or financial aid application essay.
4. Read Sample Scholarship Essays and Admissions
Essays
Before writing a poem, you would certainly read past
poets. Before writing a book of philosophy, you would
consider past philosophers. In the same way, we recommend
reading sample application essays to understand what
topics other applicants chose. EssayEdge maintains an
archive of over 100 free sample application essays.
Click
here
to view sample essays that worked.
5. Goal Determination
Life is short. Why do you want spend 2-6 years of your
life at a particular college, graduate school, or professional
school? How is the degree necessary to the fulfillment
of your goals? When considering goals, think broadly.
Few people would be satisfied with just a career. How
else will your education fit your needs and lead you
to a fulfilling life?
If after reading this entire page you do
not have an idea for your essay, do not be surprised.
Coming up with an idea is difficult and requires time.
Actually consider the questions and exercises above. Without
a topic you feel passionate about, without one that brings
out the defining aspects of you personality, you risk
falling into the trap of sounding like the 90 percent
of scholarship applicants who will write boring essays.
The only way to write a unique essay is to have experiences
that support whatever topic you come up with. Whatever
you do, don't let the essay stress you out. Have fun with
the brainstorming process. You might discover something
about yourself you never consciously realized.
Good Luck!
Step
Two - Selecting an Essay Topic
Having completed step one, you should now
have a rough idea of the elements you wish to include
in your scholarship essay, including your goals, important
life experiences, research experience, diversifying features,
spectacular nonacademic accomplishments, financial need,
etc. You should also now have an idea of what impression
you want to make on the scholarship committee.
You must now consider topics that will allow
you to synthesize your important personal characteristics
and experiences into a coherent whole. While most scholarship
essays allow great latitude in topic selection, you must
also be sure to answer the questions that were asked of
you. Leaving a lasting impression on someone who reads
50 essays a day will not be easy, but we have compiled
some guidelines to help you get started.
Consider the following questions before
proceeding:
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Have
you selected a topic that describes something of
personal importance in your life, with which you
can use vivid personal experiences as supporting
details?
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Is
your topic a gimmick? That is, do you plan to write
your essay in iambic pentameter or make it funny.
You should be very, very careful if you are planning
to do this. We recommend strongly that you do not
do this. Almost always, this is done poorly and
is not appreciated by the scholarship committee
unless a creative approach is explicitly recommended.
Nothing is worse than not laughing or not being
amused at something that was written to be funny
or amusing.
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Will
your topic only repeat information listed elsewhere
on your application? If so, pick a new topic. Don?t
mention GPAs or standardized test scores in your
essay if they are mentioned elsewhere.
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Can
you offer vivid supporting paragraphs to your essay
topic? If you cannot easily think of supporting
paragraphs with concrete examples, you should probably
choose a different essay topic.
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Can
you fully answer the question asked of you? Can
you address and elaborate on all points within the
specified word limit? If you plan on writing about
something technical, make sure you truly can back
up your interest in a topic and are not merely throwing
around big scientific words. Unless you convince
the reader that you actually have the life experiences
to back up your interest in neurobiology, the reader
will assume you are trying to impress him/her with
shallow tactics. Also, be sure you can write to
the scholarship officers and that you are not writing
over their heads.
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Can
you keep the reader's interest from the first word.
The entire essay must be interesting, considering
scholarship officers will probably only spend a
few minutes reading each essay.
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Is
your topic overdone? To ascertain this, peruse through
old essays. EssayEdge's 100 free application essays
can help you do this. However, most topics are overdone,
and this is not a bad thing. A unique or convincing
answer to a classic topic can pay off big.
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Will
your topic turnoff a large number of people? If
you write on how everyone should worship your God,
how wrong or right abortion is, or how you think
the Republican or Democratic Party is evil, you
will not win the scholarship or aid award. The only
thing worse than not writing a memorable essay is
writing an essay that will be remembered negatively.
Stay away from specific religions, political doctrines,
or controversial opinions. You can still write an
essay about Nietzsche's influence on your life,
but express understanding that not all intelligent
people will agree with Nietzsche's claims. Emphasize
instead Nietzsche's influence on your life,
and not why you think he was wrong or right in his
claims.
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In
this vein, if you are presenting a topic that is
controversial, you must acknowledge counter arguments
without sounding arrogant.
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Will
a scholarship officer remember your topic after
a day of reading hundreds of essays? What will the
officer remember about your topic? What will the
officer remember about you? What will your lasting
impression be?
After evaluating your essay topics with
the above criteria and asking for the free opinions of
EssayEdge editors, of your teachers or colleagues, and
of your friends, you should have at least 1-2 interesting
essay topics. Consider the following guidelines below.
1. If you are planning on writing
an essay on how you survived poverty in Russia, your mother's
suicide, your father's kidnapping, or your immigration
to America from Asia, you should be careful that your
main goal is to address your own personal qualities. Just
because something sad or horrible has happened to you
does not mean that you should win a scholarship. You don't
want to be remembered as the pathetic applicant. You want
to be remembered as the applicant who showed impressive
qualities under difficult circumstances. It is for this
reason that essays relating to this topic are considered
among the best. Unless you only use the horrible experience
as a lens with which to magnify your own personal characteristics,
you will not write a good essay.
2. "Diversity" is the
biggest buzzword of the 1990's. For this reason, so many
applicants are tempted to declare what makes them diverse.
However, simply saying you are a black, lesbian female
will not impress scholarship officers in the least. While
an essay incorporating this information would probably
be your best topic idea, you must finesse the issue by
addressing your own personal qualities and how you overcame
stigma, dealt with social ostracism, etc. If you are a
rich student from Beverly Hills whose father is an engineer
and whose mother is a lawyer, but you happen to be a minority,
an essay about how you dealt with adversity would be unwise.
You must demonstrate vividly your personal qualities,
interests, motivations, etc. Address specifically how
your diversity will contribute to the realm of campus
opinion, the academic environment, and the larger society.
3. Don't mention weaknesses unless
you absolutely need to explain them away. You want to
make a positive first impression, and telling a scholarship
officer anything about drinking, drugs, partying, etc.
undermines your goal. EssayEdge editors have read more
essays on ADD (Attention Deficit Disorder) than we would
ever have imagined. Why admit to weakness when you can
instead showcase your strengths?
4. Be honest, but not for honesty's
sake. Unless you are a truly excellent writer, your best,
most passionate writing will be about events that actually
occurred. While you might be tempted to invent hardship,
it is completely unnecessary. Write an essay about your
life that demonstrates your personality.
Step
Three: Writing the Essay, Tips for Success
Even
seemingly boring topics can be made into exceptional scholarship
essays with an innovative approach. In
writing the essay you must bear in mind your two goals:
to persuade the scholarship officer that you are extremely
worthy of receiving college assistance and to make the officer
aware that you are more than a GPA and a standardized score,
that you are a real-life, intriguing personality.
Unfortunately,
there is no surefire step-by-step method to writing a
good essay. EssayEdge editors at www.EssayEdge.com
will remake your essay into an awesome, memorable masterpiece,
but every topic requires a different treatment since no
two essays are alike. However, we have compiled the following
list of tips that you should find useful while writing
your scholarship
essay.
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Answer
the Question.
You can follow the next 12 steps, but if you miss
the question, you will not win
the scholarship.
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Be
Original. Even
seemingly boring essay topics can sound interesting
if creatively approached. If writing about a gymnastics
competition you trained for, do not start your essay:
"I worked long hours for many weeks to train
for XXX competition." Consider an opening like,
"Every morning I awoke at 5:00 to sweat, tears,
and blood as I trained on the uneven bars hoping
to bring the state gymnastics trophy to my hometown."
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Be
Yourself.
The
scholarship committee wants
to learn about you and your writing ability. Write
about something meaningful and describe your feelings,
not necessarily your actions. If you do this, your
essay will be unique. Many people travel to foreign
countries or win competitions, but your feelings
during these events are unique to you. Unless a
philosophy or societal problem has interested you
intensely for years, stay away from grand themes
that you have little personal experience with.
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Don't
"Thesaurize" your Composition.
For some reason, students continue to think big
words make good essays. Big words are fine, but
only if they are used in the appropriate contexts
with complex styles. Think Hemingway.
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Use
Imagery and Clear, Vivid Prose.
If you are not adept with imagery, you can
write an excellent essay without it, but it's not
easy. The application essay lends itself to imagery
since the entire essay requires your experiences
as supporting details. Appeal to the five senses
of the scholarship officers.
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Spend
the Most Time on your Introduction. Expect
scholarship
officers to spend 1-2 minutes reading your essay.
You must use your introduction to grab their interest
from the beginning. You might even consider completely
changing your introduction after writing your body
paragraphs.
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Don't
Summarize in your Introduction. Ask
yourself why a reader would want to read your
entire essay after reading your introduction.
If you summarize, the scholarship
officer need not read the rest of your essay.
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Create
Mystery or Intrigue in your Introduction.
It is not necessary or recommended that your
first sentence give away the subject matter.
Raise questions in the minds of the scholarship
officers to force them to read on. Appeal to
their emotions to make them relate to your subject
matter.
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Body
Paragraphs Must Relate to Introduction. Your
introduction can be original, but cannot be silly.
The paragraphs that follow must relate to your introduction.
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Use
Transition.
Applicants continue to ignore transition to their
own detriment. You must use transition within paragraphs
and especially between paragraphs to preserve the
logical flow of your essay. Transition is not limited
to phrases like "as a result, in addition,
while . . . , since . . . , etc." but includes
repeating key words and progressing the idea. Transition
provides the intellectual architecture to argument
building.
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Conclusions
are Crucial. The
conclusion is your last chance to persuade the reader
or impress upon them your qualifications. In the
conclusion, avoid summary since the essay is rather
short to begin with; the reader should not need
to be reminded of what you wrote 300 words before.
Also do not use stock phrases like "in conclusion,
in summary, to conclude, etc." You should consider
the following conclusions:
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Expand
upon the broader implications of your discussion.
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Consider
linking your conclusion to your introduction
to establish a sense of balance by reiterating
introductory phrases.
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Redefine
a term used previously in your body paragraphs.
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End
with a famous quote that is relevant to your
argument. Do not try to do this, as this
approach is overdone. This should come naturally.
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Frame
your discussion within a larger context or show
that your topic has widespread appeal.
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Remember,
your essay need not be so tidy that you can
answer why your little sister died or why people
starve in Africa; you are not writing a "sit-com,"
but should forge some attempt at closure.
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Do
Something Else.
Spend a week or so away from your draft to decide
if you still consider your topic and approach worthwhile.
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Give
your Draft to Others. Ask
editors to read with these questions in mind:
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Revise,
Revise, Revise.
You only are allowed so many words; use them wisely.
If H.D. Thoreau couldn't write a good essay without
revision, neither will you. Delete anything in the
essay that does not relate to your main argument.
Do you use transition? Are your introduction and
conclusions more than summaries? Did you find every
single grammatical error?
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Allow
for the evolution of your main topic. Do not
assume your subject must remain fixed and that
you can only tweak sentences.
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Editing
takes time. Consider reordering your supporting
details, delete irrelevant sections, and make
clear the broader implications of your experiences.
Allow your more important arguments to come
to the foreground. Take points that might only
be implicit and make them explicit.
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