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Scholarship
Essay One
CRABIEL
SCHOLARSHIP WINNER - won $3,000 scholarship
Like
Mr. Crabiel, I literally work tirelessly in many academic
and leadership roles. I sleep no more than six hours a
night because of my desire to expertly meet my many commitments.
Throughout my life, I have worked as long and as hard
as I possibly can to effect beneficial changes in both
school and society.
During
the summer of tenth grade, I took a number theory course
at Johns Hopkins University with students from Alaska,
California, and Bogota, Colombia. Similarly, during the
summer following eleventh grade, I was one of ninety students
from New Jersey selected to attend the Governor's School
in the Sciences at Drew University. At Drew, I took courses
in molecular orbital theory, special relativity, cognitive
psychology, and I participated in an astrophysics research
project. For my independent research project, I used a
telescope to find the angular velocity of Pluto. With
the angular velocity determined, I used Einstein's field
equations and Kepler's laws to place an upper bound on
the magnitude of the cosmological constant, which describes
the curvature of space and the rate of the universe's
expansion.
In
addition to learning science, I recently lectured physics
classes on special relativity at the request of my physics
teacher. After lecturing one class for 45 minutes, one
student bought many books on both general and special
relativity to read during his study hall. Inspiring other
students to search for knowledge kindles my own quest
to understand the world and the people around me.
As
president of the National Honor Society, I tutor students
with difficulties in various subject areas. In addition,
I am ranked number one in my class with an SAT score of
1580 and SATII scores of 750 in math, 760 in writing,
and 800 in physics. In school, I take the hardest possible
courses including every AP course offered at the high
school. I am the leading member of the Math Team, the
Academic Team, and the Model Congress Team. In the area
of leadership, I have recently received the Rotary Youth
Leadership Award from a local rotary club, have been asked
to attend the National Youth Leadership Forum on Law and
the Constitution in Washington D.C., and wrote the winning
essay on patriotism for South Plainfield's VFW chapter.
Currently enrolled in Spanish 6,I am a member of both
the Spanish Club and the Spanish Honor Society. In addition,
I recently was named a National Merit Scholar.
Besides
involvement in academic and leadership positions, I am
active in athletics. For instance, I lift weights regularly.
In addition, I am the captain of my school's varsity tennis
team. So far this year, my individual record on the team
is 3-0.
Working
vigorously upon being elected Student Council President,
I have begun a biweekly publication of student council
activities and opinions. Also, the executive board under
my direction has opened the school store for the first
time in nearly a decade. With paint and wood, we turned
a janitor's closet into a fantastic store. I also direct
many fund raisers and charity drives. For instance, I
recently organized a charity drive that netted about $1,500
for the family of Alicia Lehman, a local girl who received
a heart transplant.
As
Student Liaison to the South Plainfield Board of Education,
I am working to introduce more advanced-placement courses,
more reading of philosophy, and more math and science
electives into the curriculum. At curriculum committee
meetings, I have been effective in making Board members
aware of the need for these courses. In addition, my speeches
at public Board meetings often draw widespread support,
which further helps to advance my plans for enhancing
the curriculum.
I
have also been effective as a Sunday school teacher. By
helping elementary school students formulate principles
and morals, I make a difference in their lives every week.
The value system that I hope to instill in them will last
them their entire lives. I find teaching first-graders
about Christ extremely rewarding.
Clearly,
I have devoted my life both to working to better myself
and to improving civilization as a whole. Throughout the
rest of my life, I hope to continue in this same manner
of unselfish work. Just as freeholder Crabiel dedicates
his life to public service, I commit my life to helping
others and to advancing society's level of understanding.
Scholarship
Essay Two
WINNING
NATIONAL MERIT SCHOLAR ESSAY
Nothing
in all the world is comparable to reading Ayn Rand beneath
New York's skyline or to studying Nietzsche atop a mountain
summit.
Since
childhood, the studies of philosophy and science have
interested me profoundly. Having read many books on relativity,
quantum mechanics, existentialism, religion, capitalism,
democracy and post-Aristotelian philosophy, my quest for
knowledge has only intensified. Certainly, the purpose
of my life is to discover a greater understanding of the
universe and its people. Specifically, I plan to better
grasp the interrelationship among forces, matter, space,
and time. In addition, I hope to find a unified field
theory and a convincing explanation for the birth of the
universe.
During
the summer of tenth grade, I took a number theory course
at Johns Hopkins University with students from Alaska,
California, and Bogota, Colombia. My attendance of the
New Jersey Governor's School in the Sciences is another
accomplishment that exemplifies my dedication to knowledge.
During the summer following eleventh grade, I took courses
in molecular orbital theory, special relativity, cognitive
psychology, and I participated in an astrophysics research
project. For my independent research project, I used a
telescope to find the angular velocity of Pluto. With
the angular velocity determined, I used Einstein's field
equations and Kepler's laws to place an upper bound on
the magnitude of the cosmological constant, which describes
the curvature of space and the rate of the universe's
expansion.
In
addition to learning science, I recently lectured physics
classes on special relativity at the request of my physics
teacher. After lecturing one class for 45 minutes, one
student bought many books on both general and special
relativity to read during his study hall. Inspiring other
students to search for knowledge kindles my own quest
to understand the world and the people around me.
Also,
as president of the National Honor Society, I tutor students
with difficulties in various subject areas. Moreover,
I am ranked number one in my class, and I am the leading
member of the Math Team, the Academic Team, and the Model
Congress Team. In the area of leadership, I have recently
received the Rotary Youth Leadership Award from a local
rotary club and have been asked to attend the National
Youth Leadership Forum on Law and the Constitution in
Washington D.C. Currently enrolled in Spanish 6,I am a
member of both the Spanish Club and the Spanish Honor
Society.
As
student council president, I have begun a biweekly publication
of student council activities and opinions. Also, the
executive board under my direction has opened the school
store for the first time in nearly a decade and is finding
speakers to speak at a series of colloquia on topics ranging
from physics to politics. Directing fund raisers and charity
drives also consumes much of my time. For instance, I
recently organized a charity drive that netted about $1,500
for the family of a local girl in need of a heart transplant.
Consistent
with my love of freedom and my belief in democracy, which
is best summarized by Hayek's Road to Serfdom, I have
recently initiated an application to become the liaison
to the local board of education. Also, in keeping with
my belief that individuals develop strong principles and
ideology, I teach Sunday school three months a year and
have chaperoned for a local Christian school.
Outside
pure academics and leadership roles, I lift weights five
times a week for an hour each day. In addition, I play
singles for my school's varsity tennis team. Because I
find extraordinary satisfaction in nature and have dedicated
my life to its understanding, I enjoy mountain climbing.
Among the notable peaks I have reached are Mt. Washington,
Mt Jefferson, Mt. Madison, Mt. Marcy and Mt. Katahdin.
Unquestionably, my life's aim is to dramatically raise
the height of the mountain of knowledge so that my successors
may have a more accurate view of the universe around them.
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