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Why
Medicine? Essay
My earliest impression of medicine
occurred when my mother repeatedly required
the assistance of physicians in dealing with
her chronic migraine headaches. Her doctors
were always there for her, day or night. The
respect that my parents bestowed on doctors,
and the doctors' ability to ease suffering,
sparked a desire to one day become a physician
myself. This was an ambitious goal for someone
coming from a family in which no one had obtained
a professional degree. However, my traditional
family-oriented culture, emphasizing doing good
for others, contributed to this decision to
pursue a career in the medical field. Furthermore,
the American individualistic spirit gave me
the confidence and opportunity to undertake
a challenging medical career.
I also had the chance to gain
some firsthand experience in the medical profession
when I volunteered for over a year in the emergency
room of a regional hospital. From my volunteer
experience, I learned the importance of organization
and effective communication skills, and I was
exposed to the diversity that exists in my community.
It has also demonstrated to me why the American
health-care system is the best in the world;
I saw some knowledgeable minds using some very
sophisticated equipment. But I also saw many
ways it can be improved. For example, uninsured
homeless and immigrant people would often come
in, complaining of problems they had been having
for a long time. Although we would treat these
people as best we could, a health-care system
that intervenes in such sicknesses earlier would
have minimized costs associated with treating
diseases in their later stages.
As a doctor, I hope to participate
in these changes in order to benefit more people
than are currently being served. Doctors should
be able to serve people of all different races,
ages, backgrounds, and cultures. I intend to
use my skills and unique experiences to achieve
this vision of what I think a doctor should
be.
Uniqueness
Essay
Martial arts and medicine. They
seem worlds apart, but they both have played
significant roles in my life and for reasons
that are surprisingly similar. They both offer
challenge, require great discipline, and necessitate
a goal-oriented approach.
I first became involved with
the martial arts when I was only 13 years old.
At that time I began studying karate in my hometown
in northern California. Even then I was a goal-oriented
individual who was attracted to the step-by-step
progression involved in studying karate. Within
a year I had earned a brown belt (the next-to-highest
ranking) and was actually serving as an instructor
at the karate academy where I had learned the
sport. Dedication, discipline, and physical
and mental prowess were behind my success, which
included being the youngest person in the area
to attain the brown belt.
In college I became involved
in Tae Kwon Do, the Korean counterpart of karate.
This sport, too, requires patience, determination,
and a clear mind in addition to physical strength,
endurance, and agility. Within a year I had
become president of my university's 80-member
Tae Kwon Do club, which ranks among the top
sports clubs on campus. In assuming this position
I began to have the opportunity to test myself
as a leader as well as an athlete.
One of the reasons I became
interested in medicine is that it, too, requires
a meticulous, goal-oriented approach that is
very demanding. Of course, it also happens that
the substance of the profession holds strong
appeal for me, both in terms of the science
and the potential for serving others who are
in need.
Most of my exposure to the profession
has occurred within the areas of surgery and
emergency medicine. After first serving as an
emergency medicine volunteer technician at a
northern California hospital (where I had a
moving experience with a young girl's death),
I acquired the EMT-1A/CPR certifications and
then worked as an Emergency Medical Technician-1A
during a subsequent summer. This job was a fascinating,
educational, and high-pressure experience that
exposed me to the realities of medicine as practiced
in crisis situations.
My extensive involvement with
cardio thoracic surgery research over the last
three years, first as a volunteer technician
and currently as a staff research technician,
has further fueled my desire to become a physician.
I have had to rely upon my own ingenuity and
problem solving skills as well as what I have
learned in the classroom, and this has been
exciting. One of the more unusual aspects of
my work has involved me directly in the procedure
of heterotopic heart transplantation in rats.
This precise and technically demanding procedure
encompasses microsurgery and usually is conducted
only by residents. In fact, I am the only undergraduate
student doing this procedure, which has shown
me the extent of both my manual dexterity and
capacity for learning sophisticated techniques.
I have been fortunate enough
to have had the opportunity to participate and
contribute in almost every way during experiments,
from administering anesthesia and performing
extensive surgical preparations to analyzing
the data obtained and operating monitoring and
recording equipment, ventilators, and the heart-lung
machine.
I am a somewhat shy individual,
but I have found that within the medical environment
my shyness evaporates. The opportunity to help
others one-on-one is so rewarding and comfortable
for me that I feel very much at ease, regardless
of with whom I am working. I think one of the
particularly attractive aspects of medicine
for me, especially within such specialties as
internal medicine and obstetrics/gynecology,
is the potential for forming close, lasting,
meaningful relationships with a wide array of
patients.
For me, medicine emerges as
the perfect avenue for indulging my impulses
to contribute, to be involved with science,
and to establish important links with others
at both critical and noncritical moments in
their lives.
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