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Step
One: Brainstorming
The
most important part of your essay is the subject
matter. You should expect to devote about 1-2 weeks
simply to brainstorming ideas. To begin brainstorming
a subject idea consider the following points. From
brainstorming, you may find a subject you had not
considered at first.
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What
are your major accomplishments, and why do you
consider them accomplishments? Do not limit
yourself to accomplishments you have been formally
recognized for since the most interesting essays
often are based on accomplishments that may
have been trite at the time but become crucial
when placed in the context of your life.
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Does
any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish
you from everyone else? How did you develop
this attribute?
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Consider
your favorite books, movies, works of art, etc.
Have these influenced your life in a meaningful
way? Why are they your favorites?
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What
was the most difficult time in your life, and
why? How did your perspective on life change
as a result of the difficulty?
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Have
you ever struggled mightily for something and
succeeded? What made you successful?
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Have
you ever struggled mightily for something and
failed? How did you respond?
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Of
everything in the world, what would you most
like to be doing right now? Where would you
most like to be? Who, of everyone living and
dead, would you most like to be with? These
questions should help you realize what you love
most.
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Have
you experienced a moment of epiphany, as if
your eyes were opened to something you were
previously blind to?
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What
is your strongest, most unwavering personality
trait? Do you maintain strong beliefs or adhere
to a philosophy? How would your friends characterize
you? What would they write about if they were
writing your admissions essay for you?
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What
have you done outside of the classroom that
demonstrates qualities sought after by universities?
Of these, which means the most to you?
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What
are your most important extracurricular or community
activities? What made you join these activities?
What made you continue to contribute to them?
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What
are your dreams of the future? When you look
back on your life in thirty years, what would
it take for you to consider your life successful?
What people, things, and accomplishments do
you need? How does this particular university
fit into your plans for the future?
If
these questions cannot cure your writer's block,
consider the following exercises:

If you cannot characterize yourself and your personality
traits do not automatically leap to mind, ask your
friends to write a list of your five most salient
personality traits. Ask your friends why they chose
the ones they did. If an image of your personality
begins to emerge, consider life experiences that
could illustrate the particular traits.

While admissions officers are not interested in
reading about your childhood and are more interested
in the last 2-4 years of your life, you might consider
events of your childhood that inspired the interests
you have today. Interests that began in childhood
may be the most defining parts of your life, even
if you recently lost interest. For instance, if
you were interested in math since an early age and
now want to study medicine, you might incorporate
this into your medical school admissions essay.
Analyze the reasons for your interests and how they
were shaped from your upbringing.

Many applicants do not have role models and were
never greatly influenced by just one or two people.
However, for those of you who have role models and
actually aspire to become like certain people, you
may want to incorporate a discussion of that person
and the traits you admired into your application
essay.

Before you sat down to write a poem, you would certainly
read past poets. Before writing a book of philosophy,
you would consider past philosophers. In the same
way, we recommend reading sample admissions essays
to understand what topics other applicants chose.
EssayEdge maintains an archive of over 100 free
sample admissions essays. Click here to view
sample essays that worked.

Life is short. Why do you want spend 2-6 years of
your life at a particular college, graduate school,
or professional school? How is the degree necessary
to the fulfillment of your goals? When considering
goals, think broadly. Few people would be satisfied
with just a career. How else will your education
fit your needs and lead you to a fulfilling life?
If
after reading this entire page you do not have an
idea for your essay, do not be surprised. Coming
up with an idea is difficult and requires time.
Actually consider the questions and exercises above.
Without a topic you feel passionate about, without
one that brings out the defining aspects of you
personality, you risk falling into the trap of sounding
like the 90 percent of applicants who will write
boring admissions essays. The only way to write
a unique essay is to have experiences that support
whatever topic you come up with. Whatever you do,
don't let the essay stress you out. Have fun with
the brainstorming process. You might discover something
about yourself you never consciously realized.
Good
Luck!
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Step
Two - Selecting an Essay Topic
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Having
completed step one, you should now have a rough
idea of the elements you wish to include in your
essay, including your goals, important life experiences,
research experience, diversifying features, spectacular
nonacademic accomplishments, etc. You should also
now have an idea of what impression you want to
make on the admissions officers.
We
should remark that at this stage, undergraduate
applicants have a large advantage over graduate
school applicants. Whereas nobody questions a high
school student's motivation to attend college, graduate
and professional school applicants must directly
address in their essays their desire to study their
selected field.
You
must now confront the underlying problem of the
admissions essay. You must now consider topics that
will allow you to synthesize your important personal
characteristics and experiences into a coherent
whole while simultaneously addressing your desire
to attend a specific institution. While most admissions
essays allow great latitude in topic selection,
you must also be sure to answer the questions that
were asked of you. Leaving a lasting impression
on someone who reads 50-100 essays a day will not
be easy, but we have compiled some guidelines to
help you get started. With any luck, one or two
topics, with small changes, will allow you to answer
application questions for 5-7 different colleges,
although admissions officers do appreciate essays
that provide convincing evidence of how an applicant
will fit into a particular academic environment.
You should at least have read the college's webpage,
admissions catalog, and have an understanding of
the institution's strengths.
Consider
the following questions before proceeding:
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Have
you selected a topic that describes something
of personal importance in your life, with
which you can use vivid personal experiences
as supporting details?
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Is
your topic a gimmick? That is, do you plan
to write your essay in iambic pentameter or
make it funny. You should be very, very careful
if you are planning to do this. We recommend
strongly that you do not do this. Almost always,
this is done poorly and is not appreciated
by the admissions committee. Nothing is worse
than not laughing or not being amused at something
that was written to be funny or amusing.
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Will
your topic only repeat information listed
elsewhere on your application? If so, pick
a new topic. Don't mention GPAs or standardized
test scores in your essay.
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Can
you offer vivid supporting paragraphs to your
essay topic? If you cannot easily think of
supporting paragraphs with concrete examples,
you should probably choose a different essay
topic.
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Can
you fully answer the question asked of you?
Can you address and elaborate on all points
within the specified word limit, or will you
end up writing a poor summary of something
that might be interesting as a report or research
paper? If you plan on writing something technical
for college admissions, make sure you truly
can back up your interest in a topic and are
not merely throwing around big scientific
words. Unless you convince the reader that
you actually have the life experiences to
back up your interest in neurobiology, the
reader will assume you are trying to impress
him/her with shallow tactics. Also, be sure
you can write to admissions officers and that
you are not writing over their heads.
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Can
you keep the reader's interest from the first
word. The entire essay must be interesting,
considering admissions officers will probably
only spend a few minutes reading each essay.
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Is
your topic overdone? To ascertain this, peruse
through old essays. EssayEdge's 100 free essays
can help you do this. However, most topics
are overdone, and this is not a bad thing.
A unique or convincing answer to a classic
topic can pay off big.
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Will
your topic turnoff a large number of people?
If you write on how everyone should worship
your God, how wrong or right abortion is,
or how you think the Republican or Democratic
Party is evil, you will not get into the college
of your choice. The only thing worse than
not writing a memorable essay is writing an
essay that will be remembered negatively.
Stay away from specific religions, political
doctrines, or controversial opinions. You
can still write an essay about Nietzsche's
influence on your life, but express understanding
that not all intelligent people will agree
with Nietzsche's claims. Emphasize instead
Nietzsche's influence on your life,
and not why you think he was wrong or right
in his claims.
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In
this vein, if you are presenting a topic that
is controversial, you must acknowledge counter
arguments without sounding arrogant.
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Will
an admissions officer remember your topic
after a day of reading hundreds of essays?
What will the officer remember about your
topic? What will the officer remember about
you? What will your lasting impression be?
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Step
Three: Writing the Essay, Tips for Success
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Even seemingly boring topics can be made into exceptional
admissions essays with an innovative approach. In
writing the essay you must bear in mind your two
goals: to persuade the admissions officer that you
are extremely worthy of admission and to make the
admissions officer aware that you are more than
a GPA and a standardized score, that you are a real-life,
intriguing personality.
Unfortunately, there is no surefire step-by-step
method to writing a good essay. EssayEdge editors
at http://www.EssayEdge.com/ will remake your essay
into an awesome, memorable masterpiece, but every
topic requires a different treatment since no two
essays are alike. However, we have compiled the
following list of tips that you should find useful
while writing your admissions essay.
You can follow the next 11 steps, but if you miss
the question, you will not be admitted to any
institution.
Even seemingly boring essay topics can sound interesting
if creatively approached. If writing about a gymnastics
competition you trained for, do not start your
essay: "I worked long hours for many weeks
to train for XXX competition." Consider an
opening like, "Every morning I awoke at 5:00
to sweat, tears, and blood as I trained on the
uneven bars hoping to bring the state gymnastics
trophy to my hometown."
Admissions officers want to learn about you and
your writing ability. Write about something meaningful
and describe your feelings, not necessarily your
actions. If you do this, your essay will be unique.
Many people travel to foreign countries or win
competitions, but your feelings during these events
are unique to you. Unless a philosophy or societal
problem has interested you intensely for years,
stay away from grand themes that you have little
personal experience with.
For some reason, students continue to think big
words make good essays. Big words are fine, but
only if they are used in the appropriate contexts
with complex styles. Think Hemingway.
If you are not adept with imagery, you can write
an excellent essay without it, but it's not easy.
The application essay lends itself to imagery
since the entire essay requires your experiences
as supporting details. Appeal to the five senses
of the admissions officers.
Expect admissions officers to spend 1-2 minutes
reading your essay. You must use your introduction
to grab their interest from the beginning. You
might even consider completely changing your introduction
after writing your body paragraphs.
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Don't Summarize in your Introduction.
Ask yourself
why a reader would want to read your entire
essay after reading your introduction. If
you summarize, the admissions officer need
not read the rest of your essay.
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Create Mystery or Intrigue
in your Introduction.
It is not necessary or recommended that your
first sentence give away the subject matter.
Raise questions in the minds of the admissions
officers to force them to read on. Appeal
to their emotions to make them relate to your
subject matter.
Your introduction can be original, but cannot
be silly. The paragraphs that follow must relate
to your introduction.
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The conclusion is your last chance to persuade
the reader or impress upon them your qualifications.
In the conclusion, avoid summary since the essay
is rather short to begin with; the reader should
not need to be reminded of what you wrote 300
words before. Also do not use stock phrases like
"in conclusion, in summary, to conclude,
etc." You should consider the following conclusions:
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Expand upon the broader implications of your
discussion.
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Consider linking your conclusion to your introduction
to establish a sense of balance by reiterating
introductory phrases.
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Redefine a term used previously in your body
paragraphs.
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End with a famous quote that is relevant to
your argument. Do not try to do this,
as this approach is overdone. This should
come naturally.
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Frame your discussion within a larger context
or show that your topic has widespread appeal.
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Remember, your essay need not be so tidy that
you can answer why your little sister died
or why people starve in Africa; you are not
writing a "sit-com," but should
forge some attempt at closure.
Spend a week or so away from your draft to decide
if you still consider your topic and approach
worthwhile.
Ask editors to read with these questions in mind:
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WHAT is the essay about?
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Have I used active voice verbs wherever possible?
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Is my sentence structure varied or do I use
all long or all short sentences?
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Do you detect any cliches?
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Do I use transition appropriately?
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Do I use imagery often and does this make
the essay clearer and more vivid?
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What's the best part of the essay?
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What about the essay is memorable?
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What's the worst part of the essay?
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What parts of the essay need elaboration or
are unclear?
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What parts of the essay do not support your
main argument or are immaterial to your case?
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Is every single sentence crucial to the essay?
This MUST be the case.
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What does the essay reveal about your personality?
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Could anyone else have written this essay?
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How would you fill in the following blank
based on the essay: "I want to accept
you to this college because our college needs
more ________."
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